I was trying to clean up the folders in my pc, when I bumped into this one written by Dhanesh , way back in 2003! Short, it conveys a good message, just a share!
THE BAIT
She comes with a murky
smile smoldering even
the coolest one;
impassioning with
the hottest smooch
but smothering the
deepest thread.
The holder often
enthralls with pride
while she starts
her work on
the hand,
later jigging
the spirit of the
mind.
But it may be
too late to retrieve
as her passions
obtrude to reign
while she, the
cigarette would
have devoured
your lungs.
THE BAIT
She comes with a murky
smile smoldering even
the coolest one;
impassioning with
the hottest smooch
but smothering the
deepest thread.
The holder often
enthralls with pride
while she starts
her work on
the hand,
later jigging
the spirit of the
mind.
But it may be
too late to retrieve
as her passions
obtrude to reign
while she, the
cigarette would
have devoured
your lungs.
adipoli.....second time vayichappol aanu meaning manasilayathu...;)
ReplyDeleteEthara ee unknown? With the smiley, I think I can guess! (Athu pinne ellam anagne anallo!!!!!)
ReplyDeletechechi......:)
DeleteA completely different approach n style!
ReplyDeleteAh, a very unique and nice poem....
ReplyDeletesuni... i 'm not goin to comment on ur poem but...... wht i feel most are ur ear rings... rather than my picture,,over shadowing the whole go... jhumka giraaa re bareiley ke baazaar mein... famous hindi song of 60's
ReplyDeletewatch out !! for ur self. smile.....
Wowwww!
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